By Trix Wilkins
This is the conversation I imagine would have transpired between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Theodore Laurence had they met in London after Jo March’s rejection.
This is all of speculation, fan fiction, and homage – thank you Jane Austen, for creating such a strong character in Darcy, and Louisa May Alcott, for all the simmering potential in Laurie.
Laurie: Mr Darcy, might I trouble you for some advice?
Darcy: I would be honored to help, if I am able.
Laurie: I have recently proposed to a woman who has rejected me. I understand you have some experience in this matter?
Darcy: Ahhh, yes. One of the most troubling experiences of my life. It might help you to examine the mode of your declaration, before proceeding with any further action – part of the failure of your suit might lie there. Did you happen to disparage her family by repeatedly dwelling on the fact that you had been reluctant to pursue a union with her due to your abhorrence of the idea of associating with such relations?
Laurie: No, I quite like her family – and I believe the feeling is mutual. I didn’t mention her family at all, when I asked her to marry me.
Darcy: That is a good start. Did you disparage someone else she cares about, who you might not care for at all and might even detest – another man, perhaps?
Laurie: Well, I didn’t disparage him – but I did call him old, and I did say something along the lines of, “Don’t tell me that you love him?” She was quite unhappy with that.
Darcy (nods): I see. I made a similar mistake – one, thankfully, that I found could be undone. A detailed letter of explanation would suffice. Was she perhaps under some sort of mistaken impression as to your character? Again, an explanation in a letter can be quite effective in undoing any harmful prejudice.
Laurie: Actually, we’ve known each other for years. She is my closest friend and I believe knows my character well. She did say however, “You are a great deal too good for me.” I completely disagree with that – if anything, I’m not half good enough for her.
Darcy: And did you subsequently write her a letter, to inform her that she is laboring under a false impression? That she is, in fact, a lady most worthy of your faithful love and devotion?
Laurie: Ahhh, no… I did write her some letters while I’ve been abroad, asking her again to marry me.
Darcy: I assume your letters did not meet with a positive response.
Laurie: No, she was quite adamant in her refusal. She also didn’t want to talk of marriage at the time – her favorite sister Beth was very ill, and thought to be dying.
Darcy: A family crisis – a tragedy, to be sure, but the perfect opportunity for you to demonstrate the strength of your character and the depth of your passion for her. I believe that was what won my Elizabeth – her sister Lydia seemed irretrievable from ruin, and I took steps to ensure that did not happen, whilst keeping it a secret from her. I did not actually assist because I sought her favor, but because I sought her peace of mind. Nevertheless, that situation did lead her to thinking better of me, in the end. I assume, then, that you came home from abroad, to both bear her grief with her and direct all your energy and resources to assist in ensuring the well-being of this beloved sister?
Laurie: No… No, I didn’t do that.
Darcy: Did you write some letters in order to secure the best doctors in the country for her sister Beth, then? As I said, letters can have great impact.
Laurie: No…
Darcy: May I ask, what did you do?
Laurie: I stayed in Europe and comforted her sister Amy.
Darcy (looking incredulous): You comforted her sister?! My dear man, I don’t know that there’s anything I can do for you.
Laurie: Please, Mr Darcy, there must be something I can do! There must be a way!
Darcy: You have a very small window of opportunity now to win her, after the way you have squandered all opportunities thus far to demonstrate that you are after all a man of character, and worthy of her affections. Write some letters, secure some doctors for Beth – and get yourself on the first ship home! You cannot simply tell a woman in words that you love her, you must show her through your deeds!
Laurie: Yes sir, thank you sir.
Darcy (muttering, after Laurie has left): She was right to refuse him. Ah, well. We’ll see if he proves himself worthy.
Bravo! Two of my favorite books meet here. The thought of Darcy handing out courtship advice…
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They’re two of my favourite books too 🙂 I’ve always wondered what it might be like to have the Austen men and the Alcott men altogether in one room discussing politics etc!
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Great job. 😀 Loved it! Oh, Darcy… but True True. 😀
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Thanks! =D I had such fun writing this! My husband tells me guys are more forthright with each other in confrontations 😉
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Loved it and am sharing on my facebook page tomorrow,
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I always thought that Jo did right refusing Teddy. But, I always assume that they will be endgame. Alas, I was 9 at the time and obviously mistaken. I never recovered from that punch. I love Darcy too and I found that this conversation is much like something he would do!!
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